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Love
An impossible illusion
Whispering false promises
Of magic and wonder

Love
A traitorous lie
Secretly unreachable
Misleading and deceiving

Love
Separate from reality
Almost at your fingertips
But too far away to touch
©2008-2009 ~ImmortalWish
:iconimmortalwish:

Author's Comments

...I don't normally write poetry--I like drawing more than writing. Critiques and comments are quite welcome. I really had no clue what category to put this in; if you know, can you tell me? Also, could you tell me what all the categories are like 'Ballad, fixed, open, villanelle, spoken word, sonnet'...? I have no clue!

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:iconmcr-whiskers:
great poem!
i believe that 'other romance> open' is the only category i can think of...
:iconimmortalwish:
Thank you very much :)
Really? Okay, that's good. I really have no clue what the different types of poems are--I feel so stupid! D:
:iconmcr-whiskers:
you're welcome.
it's okay,
i rarely know anything.....

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